英语四级写作“怪招”

四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷教师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同窗们的用词和句型的运用。

高分作文标志

1、四级120-150字；六级150-180字；

2、能否长短句穿插；

3、用词能否恰当，精确，形象，尽量运用可以吸收阅卷教师眼球的闪光词；

4、关键词能否换用，切勿老用反复词；

下面给出写好一篇作文的留意事项：

1、恰当用被动替代主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比方写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2、擅长运用插入语，比方说把副词、衔接词等，作插入语放在中间，普通放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，普通放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比方说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3、一定要学会换词，换形象，详细的替代太广泛的。(考试中普通不要呈现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比方上面例子中，applicable替代proper, approaches替代ways, implement替代 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge替代 enhance one’’s competitiveness(进步某物竞争力)

下面举一篇优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 交换 very

thrilling 交换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 交换 sb. be interested in sth.

google 交换 search

an army of 交换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描绘在某个时期发作了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 交换 more and more popular

Coincident with … 十分地道的词汇，表达\"与…分歧\"的意义，交换 With …

Advancement 交换 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )交换 enter into

Current ( currently )交换 now

Appeal to sb. 交换 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 交换 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸大的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 交换 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了十分精彩的被动